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Nickname
« Thread Started on Jul 27, 2007, 8:03pm »

Rating: I'd say PG-13 for creepy obsessiveness
Summary: Um... Bella is pretty.

~~~x~X~x~~~

Nickname

Bella, he calls her.

Beautiful.

Beautiful.

Her lips are no longer red
Her eyes are no longer wide
Her hair is a mess
What would mistress say?
There is no time for vanity
There only time for Him
Something broke back there in Azkaban

Bella, he calls her
Beautiful
Beautiful
Beautiful Bella, he calls her

Thunder cracks outside her window
The house in which she dwelt as a girl
The reflection has changed
The reflection is wild
To see Miss Bella so ruined like this?
There is no time for loveliness
There is only time for War
Something broke back there in Azkaban

Bella, he calls her.
Bella.

Beautiful
Beautiful
Beautiful

Cissy was always the pretty sister
Cissy was always their father’s favorite
Andromeda was the sweet one
She was no one’s favorite
Pretty Miss Cissy takes care of herself.
There is no time to take care of herself
For this is bigger than she is.

Beautiful
Beautiful
Beautiful

Bella, he calls her,
Beautiful
Beautiful

Beautiful
Beautiful
Beautiful

~~~x~X~x~~~

*sigh* If I could write music, this would SO be a metal song.

So, basically, what I was trying to do here was show how Bella's love for the Cause bled into her love for Voldemort. And how, when she went insane in Azkaban, the (figurative) barrier dividing the two broke. And also, I wanted to give her psycho stalker love a voice.

So what did you think? Like it? Love it? Hate it?

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Re: Nickname
« Reply #1 on Jul 27, 2007, 8:12pm »

I had a sorta metal-ballad beat behind that, and a soft vocal line to it, so I think I could see it as a song too o_o

I'm interested to know who you were thinking of as the narrator when you wrote this, to see if it matches up with my interpretation...?

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Why yes, I do have a fertile and rather twisted imagination...

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Re: Nickname
« Reply #2 on Jul 27, 2007, 8:32pm »

Bella is narrating.

Unfortunately, she is so crazy that the part of her brain narrating is not even her own brain anymore, but Kreacher.

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Re: Nickname
« Reply #3 on Jul 27, 2007, 8:35pm »

Ah, okay.

'cause I was thinking as I read it that it sounded a lot like Kreacher.

And now, reading it again and thinking of Bella as the narrator, it makes a lot of sense, the wording and thought behind it, the images brought up...

Very nice work, you're quite the skilled poet.

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